My poem I made.

**~Singing.Out.My.Heart~** · Subject: Re: My poem I made. Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:19 am

Thank you all, I appreciate it. ^_^ I shall work on a better one!

**EmilyWednesdayx** · Subject: Re: My poem I made. Fri Jun 27, 2008 4:37 am

Making it longer does not necessarily mean it will get better.
It's short and makes a point. It is very good, in my opinion.

**Hershey** · Subject: Re: My poem I made. Thu Jun 26, 2008 7:58 am

I realy like it.
MAKE IT LONGA! xD

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**PAK ATTAK** · Subject: Re: My poem I made. Thu Jun 26, 2008 4:23 am

hmmm... Work on it more. It'll work out as it gets longer. cheers

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**~Singing.Out.My.Heart~** · Subject: My poem I made. Thu Jun 26, 2008 4:03 am

Time Passes Like The Winter Wind,
But Friendships Last Forever.
Stay By My Side And I Will Stand Strong,
I Will Not Be Blown By Wind Nor Rain.